100 Word Challenge - A Family Members Perspective

I have been learning to add detail to my writing . we had to imagine if we were a soldier or a family member and write about this picture I used my 5 senses to make my writing more intresting my next step is to add more adjechives to make my writing more intristing . add use my 5 senses to add more detail. use language features like similes onomatopaia and alliteation