we are learning about structure and order of writing an explanation. we had to put the piece of writing in the correct order. I found this tricky because you have to make them to order My next step is to write my own explanation.
We have been learning to compare and contrast different celebrations. My group researched information about Holi. I found intresting was the writing. Next we worked with ather group and use a venndigram to compare are celebrations. My next step is to put more detail and information in the venndigram
I have been learning about celebrations there are diffrent types of celebration we had to talk abut this celebrations and decide what type of celebration they were. I found this easy because you just have to do family religion event and culture
I have been learning to add detail to my writing . we had to imagine if we were a soldier or a family member and write about this picture I used my 5 senses to make my writing more intresting my next step is to add more adjechives to make my writing more intristing . add use my 5 senses to add more detail. use language features like similes onomatopaia and alliteation
I have been learning to use strategies to add detail to my writing wrote about a moment in time during my holidays I used my 5 senses to my writing the best part of this is when I was going to do my picture I need to improve.. I got a lot better at my moment in time I found this easy because you need to write your moment in time and your picture. My next step is to use three adjectives in a row in one of my sentences.
I have been learning to understand how suffixes change the meaning of a word. I found this easy because you just need to do your ed and ing. My next step is to be able to explain how a suffix changes the meaning and understand what a preffix is
this is my pepeha Art A pepeha is A way of introducing yourself in Maori. I have included my maunga mountain, my awa river my calture and a place which is special to me My favorite part of this was colouring the beach. I enjoyd doing this art work.
I have been learning to find and summarise Information in non-fiction text. I found this piece of work easy because Taylor helped me to find the information. My next step is to keep working on summarising information.
I have been learning to write an antonym diamante poem An antonym is word that means the opposite. A diamante poem is poem in the shape of a diamond. 1 found this hard because I didnt know what opposite meant and it was hard to think of the words. My next step is to think of more words.
I have been learning to use metaphors to make it more interesting by making pictures in the readers head. I found this work tricky because I was a bit confused about what to do. My next step is to ask for more help.
We have been learning to write a biopoem. A biopoem is a poem written about ourselves. it has a special structure that we had to use to write our poems. I found this tricky because it was hard to think of the ideas. My next step is to use more interesting words.
Welcome to my Year 4 l learning blog This year I am in Room 12 and my teacher is Melville I enjoy having a New Lego. This year I am looking forward to doing sports. I hope you will enjoy my blog and leave lots of feedback